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Rainbowfartz
MujnaD
• 3/19/2014

Pages in Need of Attention

These pages are in need of content or more reliable content:

Art


Kitpup7 (this page is to be updated in an admin-like way)


User Sandboxes (more sandboxes are made, more templates and creative discussion)


Style Manual This may almost be the MOST IMPORTANT page on the wiki and needs MORE content. I have produced the characters "Bob", "Olivia", "Robert" and "Kevin". Use them for demos.


Kitpup7, I would say you should do some light editing first to amp up your editing experience. Just don't screw up anything, 'kay? ;)

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Rainbowfartz
MujnaD
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• 3/23/2014

LOL I like how you substituted. :)

HAHA I LIED I LOVED HOW YOU SUBSTITUTED!

Haha jk I lied about lying to you.

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• 3/23/2014

I DON'T GIVE A POOP

I lied about you lying to your lie of my lie.

YOU GOT ANYTHING BETTER THAN THAT, YOU FEMALE DOG?

....or are you a duck?

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• 3/23/2014

...I'm a duck. HAHA I LIED.

I changed my profile picture. Looks like Wikia fixed the bug! You can change it now if you want. I don't think Roza is going to want to.

I want to write more angst but has no idea on what to write. Have you looked at my blog post on affiliations? Pick a wiki to afflilate and Roza will do the other.

I looked at my chibi and realized I made myself too light. But the next shade darker is TOO dark so I'm okay...

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• 3/23/2014

My shade for my chibi is right in my opinion.

I KNOW A DUCK WHEN I SEE ONE FEMALE DOG!

Maybe something NOT related to high schools? I know tht's your specialty, so maybe you shoud try writing outside of your safe zone.

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• 3/23/2014
BTW I already did the afilliation mission thing.
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• 3/23/2014

Oh great! Which wiki? I need to know so that if Roza decides to then she doesn't ask to affiliate with the same wiki you asked.

Well, It Hurts wasn't too much of a high school story. Usually High School fanfics are all fluffy and stuff...the story didn't really focus on her high school (we don't even know the name of the school), but more on her abuse and how she dealt with it (leading to an unavoidable angsty ending).

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• 3/23/2014

The I love Writing wiki. I hope Roza has better luck than me! :)

It Hurts took place in a high school. Like most angsty stories, actually. I find that if you have your story take place in a high school, and it's supposed to be short, and dark, there isn't THAT much time for character devolpment. For me, that's one of the main things I look for in plot. You did manage character devolpment quite well for a short, angsty, high-school story. Especially with the newspaper part.

If it took place in an alternate universe, or a war, perhaps both, you can easily talk about time passing, and talk more about the characters. In high school stories, every day is important, so the story is more important than the character devolpment. Sorry if I sound picky, rude, or emo-ish. Though I do agree that your ending was extremely angsty. UGH! I sound so rude and picky, don't I? Sorry!

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• 3/23/2014

LOL that's okay!

I hope Roza didn't go to the I Love Writing wiki though...

Yeah, I think the character development was well. I found the newspaper part to be great and I decided to use it. I got the "ailenation" part from the Weight of Water. I wasn't in the mood to write more of an epilogue but it definately would focus on Kotoko, Sakurako and the impact on people around her that were bystanders.

I might have written a prologue but I already said

1. Hungary died when Helena was 10 (according to the newspaper, from sickness)

2. She becomes American (sorry, I didn't know where in Canada to put this)

Also, I never mentioned Haruhi but I think she might have been a distraction from the plot and I never mentioned whether she was alive and never there or if she was dead.

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• 3/23/2014

About Haruhi, I didn't think you needed to as well. It would have taken away from the story.

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• 3/23/2014

Yeah. I added Hungary in because there are a few mentions of her and her death was a little bit of the reason why Prussia moved to America, resulting in the angsty ending (if Hungary lived, then Helena lived).

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